What I was trying to do with this paper was to give people an insight as to what goes through my mind as I am writing, and what kind of writer I am. The point that is implied is that everyone writes differently than other people. I supported my claims with sources and points that they had used in previous work. I really enjoyed writing this paper and thought that I got my points across and did what the paper asked me to do. I would especially like to get some feedback to see if my paper flowed like I wanted it to. If I had more time, I'm not sure if I would have changed anything.
Here is a link to my paper:
http://www.scribd.com/doc/80309058
When I read this paper, I understood the main point to be about your own writing process. I liked how you started off the paper with a question directly to the readers. I thought that was a great attention getter. But I do think you misunderstood who your audience is. You are writing to a general audience, not just students. I also liked how you used multiple examples of what you do in your writing process to explain what really happens. I did think your paper flowed very well so you don't need to worry about that to much. Overall I enjoyed reading this paper, but just a couple fixes and the paper will be better.
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