Monday, March 12, 2012

Final Paper 4 and cover letter

http://www.scribd.com/doc/85126430/Final-Paper

What I wanted to do with this paper was to look at what the different literacy motivations and sponsors were and to see if they had anything to gain by being a sponsor or not. My main point was that sponsors are everywhere and they aren't always a bad thing. People need sponsors and motivators to become successful readers and writers. I used some professional writers work as backup in my article. I didn't really address too many counter arguments in my paper. I think the beginning of my paper started out pretty strong I think as I went on with it I started getting writers block and really struggled with tying everything in at the end. I want readers to tell me what they get when they read it for the first time and suggestions as to how I can make it seem more professional and flow better. If I had more time I think I would try and find more sources which is what I will do before we turn it into the Young Scholars of America journal. Brad helped me a little bit with reassuring me that my paper was directed the way I wanted it to be. He, however did not do a markup for my paper, so his help was very limited.

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